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So did I get any writing done this week?

Not a thing, other than the Inktober entries.  No big surprise. Ah well.

In the meantime, have a picture of my sister’s dog, who was very happy to see us!

See you on Monday!

Because A. and I desperately need one right now.

We’ll be off for a few weeks, so you may see the occasional fly-by post.  We’ll be back in normal running mode come mid-August.

In the meantime, y’all play nice!

Hi there and thank you to those who stopped by for my reading earlier today, or will stop by on my panel tonight!  Or even if you saw the url for this blog from my flyer on the freebie table.  Glad you stopped by!  As a n00b self-pubbed author, it really means a lot to me. 😀

…that I sat down in the food court at Solomon Pond Mall and wrote the first pages of The Phoenix Effect.  The timestamp (something I do when writing longhand) shows 10:30, which I recall was later that evening — the original first pages were full of scratch-outs and mistakes, but the prose is the same.  This was the start of a new project that would take me through multiple Day Jobs, multiple years, and multiple apartments.

You might notice a few things here:

–Nehalé Usarai was named Halley Brown here, a holdover from True Faith.  [The name itself was inspired by the play between rocker Bill Haley and Halley’s Comet.  I morphed the name to its present form when I started on the revision that became A Division of Souls.]

–This version starts just like ADoS does, with Nehalé/Halley on the side of the Mirades Tower.  The Tower hadn’t been given a name yet…it was just known as ‘The Tower’ for now.  The original version also had him at the 92nd floor, which was kept almost up until the last minute, when I felt he needed to be even higher up and changed it sometime in 2015 to the 142nd floor.  There are a few failed attempts that were written not that long before this, but they never got past a few pages as I was unhappy with them.  One failed version opens not with Nehalé but two alien characters (who would morph into Ashyntoya and Akaina Shalei a short time later) witnessing explosions at a nullport terminal.

–“High up.”  That was the opening sentence for years until I chose to cut it sometime in 2012 or so, replacing it instead with Nehalé using innerspeak to say ‘dehndarra Né hra nyhndah.’

–I originally had Nehalé armed, but I decided soon after that I didn’t want guns to be a part of this story…not when they had psionic powers they could use instead.  (I also have very limited knowledge of automatic weapons, something I never had an interest in.)  The name of his pistol (Shrieve) was named after Michael Shrieve, a drummer that was briefly in a group with Sammy Hagar called HSAS.  That gun name originally popped up in True Faith.

–The geography of the Bridgetown Sprawl in The Phoenix Effect is exactly the same as what we see in the three finished books, complete with the names.  [Although I changed ‘The Docks’ to ‘the Waterfront Sector’ soon after.]  Pullock Street Heights was inspired by Sandra Bullock, with the name slightly changed.  I-90 was named after I-90 in Massachusetts, aka The Mass Pike, which was just down the road from the mall.

–It’s not on this page, but Halley will mention the name ‘Mihari’ a page or so later.  This was the original name for the Mendaihu, and taken from the Japanese word for ‘guard’.  The Shenaihu’s original name was ‘Misuteru’, which is Japanese for ‘abandon’.  These were in use for years until I chose to use names of my own making instead, maybe around 2013 or so.  ‘Mihari’ was the original name in this universe back in the winter 1993 attempts, and was of course inspired by all the anime I’d started watching about that time.

–A much darker, more cynical approach to the prose.  I’ll admit, I was going for the William Gibson cyberpunk feel.   I phased that out early on, realizing that mimicking someone else’s style rarely ever works out well for me.  And instead of Nehalé’s intense Awakening Ritual, he’d started a chain reaction of explosions around the city (climactic scene of V for Vendetta, anyone?), which basically did the same thing as the present version only with a hell of a lot more violence and destruction.

–Ah yes…the chapter titles.  I’d given each chapter the title of a song (oh so creative and typical of me…eesh) that tied in with the plot of the chapter.  ‘Ring of Fire’ refers to the Johnny Cash song as well as the ring of explosions that causes the mass Awakening.  I dropped those when I was working on ADoS in 2000.  The NEW chapter names are a relatively recent addition, added when I was finalizing the initial post-production for the e-book.

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It’s kind of fun looking at this early version, which is still in its original spiral bound notebook.  After a year or so of not really getting anywhere with True Faith or any of my other writing, it felt absolutely great to dive into something that I felt strongly about, something that I knew I could expand into something big.  It was when I got serious with my writing habits.  When I’d decided that my Day Jobs would be my paychecks, but my writing would be my lifelong career.  When I knew I was going to be in it for the long haul.

And in a superb bit of serendipity, I’ll be reading the first chapter of A Division of Souls tomorrow at FOGCon.  Exactly twenty years and one day after I’d written the above first page.

Suffice it to say, it’s been a hell of an interesting ride from then to now, but it was worth it every step of the way.

Okay, so I’ve done my End of Year reviews, my Coming Year Expectations, and my mixtape listing.  I think I’ve covered all the typical year end benchmark posts.  Now what?

It’s been quite the busy year for me.  Most of my writing time was spent carving up The Balance of Light for publication.  And right now, I still don’t think it’s fully hit me that, once that book has been released, that this long project of the trilogy will finally be DONE, and that for the first time in ages, I will have absolutely nothing on my project list.

I mean, yeah, I’m looking forward to not having the trilogy hanging over my head.  But it’s been far too long since I’ve been able to start a new project without thinking, how can I juggle this with the trilogy?  Not just that, I’m also really looking forward to writing NEW stories in that universe that are not directly related to it.

Other than the two or three possible projects (and the possible Secret Long Term Project) I have to think of, what else can I add here?

Well, for starters I’d like to shake things up a little bit.  Perhaps try a new genre.  Write shorter fiction.  Hone my nonfic writing skills.  Expand my reading habits.  Focus a little less on social media (heh, yeah right) and more on self-promotion in multiple avenues.  Believe my gut instincts more instead of flailing in Reactive Mode.  Follow up on bursts of inspiration as soon as possible.  Staying positive despite the odds.  Get creative not just on the writing end of things, but artistically as well as commercially.

And most importantly, PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE.

I’m a hell of a better guitarist than I was a few years ago, and that’s mainly because I’ve made it a point to practice more often, even if it’s just to pick up one of my axes and noodle around on it for ten minutes when I really should be focusing on my Day Job.  [Well, that, and making a concerted effort to expand my knowledge of chords past the plain major-minor ones.  Playing along with the Beatles has helped that considerably.]  If I make it a point to exercise my creative muscles every day and expand my knowledge at the same time, I can only get better at them.

That’s my plan, anyway.

See you in 2017, kids.  Stay safe, stay strong.

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“Talk hard…I like that. It’s like a dirty thought in a nice clean mind.”
— Mark Hunter, Pump Up the Volume